Using today’s quote from Songs of Unreason by Jim Harrison as a title and opening line, I allowed my mind to take flight from the restrainst of language. I unabashedly draw inspiration from Lewis Carroll for this! Here is the full quote, followed by my poem:
“Tiring of language, the mind takes flight” ~ Jim Harrison
Tiring of language, the mind takes flight
over the clains and the dauphinous heights
glaying and growling
no simpering blights
to beknight that keen slight
skimming the slaughter
flagging toes ‘cross wiggles
of blub-blubbing water
What chains do grape about my neck
that flings of flaying canst unbreach
what strums of heaven do I cast and reach?
Darkuous does the land lie low
flounded full by semantic pull
O! Gravital arms release me go
to that splendiferous plain
hide-seeking least ye beyond
those shape drift clouds
of wanton toadstools
and rabbited brows.
© Jilly All Rights Reserved
Listening to your reading of this wonderful whimsical poem, I forgot to listen to whether the words made sense or not, they all join together so perfectly, harmoniously; they sound so good.
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Thanks, Zoe! That’s perfect – the words just ‘sound’ like they make sense. That’s why I chose a soundcloud for this one. Glad it worked and glad you enjoyed!
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They do sound good! Enjoyed this greatly!
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Thanks! Had fun writing it 🙂
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Very nice sound to this one. I enjoyed the audio.
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Way! Terrific risks.
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Thank you! (How heals the hand?)
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Your second stanza is truly inspired! The whole poem shines, but those lines speak muchly with muckle import.
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High praise! 🙂
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Glorious!
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Thank you!
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🙂
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I write my poem before I read yours so there isn’t a cross over of ideas. This time they couldn’t be more different!
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/08/20/skylark/
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Ha! How true, and how wonderful!
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🙂
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Jane, I see that you have made it easy to locate your books on Amazon. Hooray! Looking forward to a bit of reading.
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I took down the fantasy series because Finch Books are going to republish it. The Pathfinders is an adventure for kids really, but the Norse Tales you might like 🙂
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Well, I’m married to a Viking, so….
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Another very good reason 🙂
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