Here is the Jim Harrison Prompt for today:
“As with dancing you have to learn the steps”
Feel free to join me in these 28 Days of Unreason as I use lines from Harrison’s Songs of Unreason as writing prompts. Here is my poem for today: “Shall We Dance? ” Cheers! Jilly
Careful lighting
Critical decor
She enters too early
As always;
never fashionably late
Perilous table selection
Too large
she is a part
of a big party yet
to arrive
Too small
A tete-a-tete
They begin
to float in
enter
“Unworthy”
followed closely
by “Failure” and “Botch”
All her old beaus
are here
tonight
but the question
that remains
With which demon
shall she dance;
With which demon
shall she go home?
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I like the word “demon” for the potential partner. Harrison’s has a conversational style. I am almost finished with the book and may read it again. I’m thinking of something for your day two theme about the sun not rising, if it comes together.
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I look forward to reading what Harrison sparks in your poetic mind. Glad you are reading Unreason – I am going through it again, as well.
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The working back and forth of internal doubt and the return of the “demon” partners is wonderful! I love the formatting — no easy task on these blogs! You have Harrisoned nicely, Jill!
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Ooo, nice verbing there! Yes, the formatting was a big chore – one of the reasons I don’t undertake this much form in WP very often.
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I understand!
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I like these prompts and am practicing with them.
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Oh, I am so glad! Whether they inspire you or you long to turn them into paper airplanes, write on, my friend!
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Past partners as demons, like dancing with the devil. I like the set up of this, “careful lighting, critical decor”, all the way to the question at the end. Good stuff!
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Thanks! I had fun working it. Harrison puts me in a strange mood 🙂
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After I read this, “Save the Last Dance for Me” started playing in my head.
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Funny, that was a potential title contender.
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This sounds like a nightmare scenario to me—the hesitations and the uncertainties, finishing up with the one certainty—she isn’t going to like any of it!
I combined this one with the dverse sonnet challenge. I can’t do sonnets in free verse, sounds like a contradiction in terms to my mind (apologies to Neruda) so I wrote a classic Shakespearean sonnet.
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/08/18/she-asks-her-love-to-dance-with-her/
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