I’m afraid of my own teeth
Sudden bony billy clubs
in the soft tissue
of my mouth, Bowie knives
lacerating my lips;
Tongue butchers.
What are they doing there?
What creator
designed such an anomaly
to house thirty-two enameled soldiers,
mandibularly backed mercenaries, in this barrack
of tender pinkness?
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For Day 6 of 28 Days of Unreason
“Her nights are full of the red teeth of death”
Jim Harrison, from Life / Dead Man’s Float
- For the record: I pulled these Harrison lines back in January, not knowing exactly when the challenge would begin or how the days would fall. As many of you know, I spent yesterday a bit loopy on the after-effects of sedation over a root-canal redo. When I saw the prompt for today, I had already made that appointment. It garnered a laugh on my part and today’s poem just seemed appropriate. The time in the chair yesterday was slight and completely painless, but my inability to find a sense of the vertical or my inner compass made the whole day rather silly. This poem is written in that light. Life is funny that way; don’t you agree? 🙂 Cheers! ~Jilly
Like this. Teeth are a bit of a design fault, I think.
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Aren’t we all afraid of our own teeth? We hid them behind our lips.
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“What creator // designed such an anomaly…?” My first reaction to this passage: “What immortal hand or eye, // Could frame thy fearful symmetry?” Teeth… tiger… danger lurking either way.
Between the inadvertent biting down on cheeks, lips, tongue and the trips to dentist, et al — wouldn’t we be better off with some other mechanism? You nailed it.
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So pleased you caught the allusion to Blake. Thank you for reading, Charley.
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Glad to!
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Not sure what substance the dentist gave you but I want some Jilly if it means being this creative – the notion of “sudden bony billy clubs” reminds me of pirates and skull and crossbones.
those last three lines are perfect:
“to house thirty-two enameled soldiers,
mandibularly backed mercenaries, in this barrack
of tender pinkness?”
p.s. hope the re-root works – nerve wracking!
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Thanks, Laura! I’d prefer to just stick with a glass of red wine, but we find the benefit where we can! I figure there needs to be one decent poem out of something like a root canal 🙂
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It does seem a design flaw, doesn’t it? I’m glad that the teeth problems resulted in such cleverness, but I’m sorry you had to go through it.
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No worries! Hope it’s a take this time.
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Lol! Give them a break! Love the descriptions😊
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Lots of great writing there. Bony billyclubs, Bowie Knives. Tongue butchers. Great pivot off the prompt.
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Thank you, thank you!
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More than teeth we fear dentists (sorry, Vivian) and their ability to goad the buggers into murderers. You capture a basic human terror beautifully 🙂
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Thanks!
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