Here is a half-poem challenge for January’s Casting Bricks to Attract Jade. Everyone is welcome to stop by the challenge and join us for collaborative poetry!
When the duckweed scums
The edge of the battered pond
He sees eyes that flint, her
Hands peeling two ripe plums,
All traces of holding back, gone.
Brush snow from the garden thyme,
See how green it loiters there
Jilly's 
https://fmmewritespoems.wordpress.com/2018/01/12/flint/
Not sure what happened there. It kind of blurted out a bit – forced by the rhyme scheme – but now I’m wondering if I should revise revise revise. Anyhow.
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Going to complete this in a mo!
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