Let the children lamentations sing
For we are by the internet captive taken
Save yourselves, oh virginal generation
For intellectual artifice is your destined heir,
their anodized steel, your veneration;
soft, weak, your flesh shall they bare.
Let the strong youth petitions bring
For our pure reason not be forsaken
Save yourselves, oh mighty youth
For logic will flail in the walls of code,
stand upon the edge of time – see the proof;
chaos will surely be your Spartan abode.
Let grownups extol the joy of books
For it is by writing and reading we live
Save your words, you fading fosters
For it is a pleasure to deny; to burn
lexicons of man the blazing imposter
your poet’s words will die, unlearned.
Let the elders shepherd with staffs and crooks
For it is seeming that to us their wisdom they give
Save your wisdom, oh perishing patriarch
For your children have slain with derision;
lit and celebrated the dying guide’s mark,
cauterized argument flayed with precision.
For Jilly’s December Casting Bricks Collaborative Challenge, this is my completion of Charley’s challenge poem (Life in Portofino). His words are in bold.
Oh my, you have read the generations so well! Bravo!
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Thank you, Charley. It was a true challenge to complete your outstanding words. I worked on it for several days. Thank you for joining in!
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I enjoy the challenges immensely! It’s fun to see what they become, again and again so different.
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Reblogged this on Life in Portofino and commented:
Jilly took on my challenge poem and made it part and parcel of a greater poem!
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Came out so great!
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Thanks!!! The formatting was essential.
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Geez! Again, with the teamwork! You guys are on a roll. I particularly loved this part, which made me see visions, I kid you not:
“Let the strong youth petitions bring
For our pure reason not be forsaken
Save yourselves, oh mighty youth
For logic will flail in the walls of code,
stand upon the edge of time – see the proof;
chaos will surely be your Spartan abode.”
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Thank you! The walls of code sprang from a real thing where I live. There is a parking garage at town center that has its outside wall done in binary code. It’s really cool all lit up at night.
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Wow! That does sound cool! Brilliant how you pulled it into metaphor the way you did.
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We wander around with all this random stuff in our heads, not knowing what to do wiht it. “Hey! Poetry!”
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