You grew in what became a picnic grove
Providing shade to what is now a park
While dying you were cut and when I drove
One morning past your place expecting dark
I found the stump, your tombstone, your new mark
And knew eventually that so will I
Look up with new perspective on the sky.
One year and a day, again walking there
Gentle green and tender shoots spring upward
Branches, leaves, hands reaching to heaven’s prayer
Joy on finding an old friend, my heart stirred
As descendant voices drew me forward
That from this future stand will grow one day
My children’s children bursting forth in May
A collaborative Chaucerian-stanza poem by Frank Hubeny (in bold) and Jilly. Posting for Jilly’s October Challenge of Casting Bricks and for dVerse Poet’s Pub.
There will be new trees to shade our children’s children starting soon. Thank you for completing the first half of this! Both Chaucerian stanzas go together well.
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Thanks for the great opener and for the well-chosen form.
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Love the circle of love, and what a great add on to Frank’s words.
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Thank you!
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I like the different perspectives.
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I had forgotten that Frank had used the form recently. How wonderfully creative to collaborate & complete his message with your own; very clever approach to the prompt.
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Thanks! It’s actually part of a collaborative project that Frank posted it to. I simply took up his challenge.
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Clever use of the first poem to compost a new one…like it.
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Ha! Composted poetry. ☺
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Yes! As in ‘here’s one I composted earlier’ 😉
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Makes me wonder what would grow if I tilled my old poems into my garden soil…
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A prayer, a blessing, a wonderful poem.
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Thanks, Vivian!
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You’re welcome!
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A brilliant creation, indeed, Jilly. You and Frank have crafted a poem to be proud of! I love the fluidity with which you both use the meter and rhyme to advantage. Poignant and endearing!
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Thank you! These collaborations really stretch me – ‘voice’ is such an illusive thing.
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“As descendent voices drew me forward,” cool wording- unexpected and as I read I was “drawn forward.” Love the transition from micro view to macro view!
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Thanks! Wanted that descendent / descendant word play.
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Yes that came through! Really nice.
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I enjoyed your collaboration, Jill and Frank, and the way your stanzas complement each other. I remember the sadness I felt when reading about the stump the first time round, so I was delighted to see ‘Gentle green and tender shoots spring upward’ in the second stanza.
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Thanks, Kim. In keeping with Frank’s usual voice, I knew it had to turn positive and hopeful. 🙂
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Touching poem..nostalgia descends 🙂
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The “gentle green and tender shoots” are such a delight to see, Jilly. While the opening stanza is gracefully poignant, your echo throws out a little surprise that’s inexplicably satisfying to read. Great poetic teamwork here! Lovin’ it.
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Thank you, Colin. This was a challenging one to complete.
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I bet. Frank often scales poetic alps like bunny hills and camouflage the intricate with everyday diction and simple rhymes. But … you crested it. 🙂
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Thanks, Colin!
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This is absolutely exquisite. Hope rings through it….the form works extremely well here. And amen to the collaboration you’ve achieved. A beautiful read. Thank you.
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Thanks!
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