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Trane Blows

Jilly’s Challenge poem for Casting Bricks September Challenge.  I wrote this more than a week ago and have been wondering just where to take it from here.  Guess I’ll just leave it to y’all to complete it!  Come on over to Casting Bricks where all poets are welcome to join in on the challenge of writing Collaborative Poetry!

drifting into the Vanguard
in ’61, Trane blows a blue-bottle
fly into my silken ear

a nightmare
pursues me
through the streets
allowing a taxi
to precipitate me
home where I have never been

the blue-bottle fly


A wild soul writing poetry.

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