The pass flora incarnate, passion flower, in all its exotic beauty, serves as the host plant to the beautiful orange Gulf and Variegated Fritillary butterflies who lay their eggs on the vine. The hatched caterpillars exfoliate the host, spin their cocoons on the plant and the cycle continues. Fortunately, the passion is prolific and returns with, well… passion.
Casting Bricks is in full swing and here is my first completed poem for Jilly’s August Challenge. The title and first four lines in Common Meter were provided by Frank Hubeny at Poetry, Short Prose and Walking. Tip ‘o the hat to Frank for an excellent challenge! I really enjoyed working with this form. If you would like to get on board with the collaborative challange of Casting Bricks, take a look at my sidebar item that gives you a direct link to the August Challenge page. (Thanks to Charley at Portofino for the html assistance making that link possible!) Frank’s portion of the poem is in bold.
What’s neither dry nor frozen hard
Makes circles red with bliss
And green takes form to guide and guard
Where flows the life blood broke with grief
But love can mend with this
Water’s healing flood comes through
“Nature detonates your mind with the incalculable freshness of the new day” ~ Jim Harrison
Day 22 of the 28 Days of Unreason gives us a quote to boggle the mind with his word choices. All 28 days are lines of Harrison’s poetry from Songs of Unreason. My poetic response to this prompt is entitled Nocturne, but does not necessarily fit the definition of a poem in that style. I simply turned Harrison’s line to the perspective of the nocturnal creatures of this world.
Pomegranate pours seed of life fertilizing the awakening chorus of crickets night bugs and tree frogs tree frogs
tree frogs usher in the newly born nocturne
poppying me into that deep green-black world where I freely see eternity
On the cusp of the last week of 28 Days of Unreason, we have one of Harrison’s most unusual lines and yet, as poets, we know what he is talking about. My response poem is something of a Diamante (diamond shape poem) but the form normally focuses on the number of words per line; mine counts syllables. If you find inspiration in any of the lines from Songs of Unreason in these challenges, please drop me a line and let me know; I would love to read your excellent work!
“Like many poets I’m part blackbird and part red squirrel and my brain chatters, shrieks, and whistles.” ~ Jim Harrison
Casting Bricks, the August Challenge opened a few hours ago and this is my Half-Poem Challenge. Anyone is welcome to take the challenge of completing my poem and reposting the collaborative final product. Please do write a half-poem challenge of your own and post a link through the Mr. Linky on the Jilly’s August Challenge page! The more the merrier, y’all!
My Challenge Poem is a Bop. The basics are 3 stanzas with 6 lines, 8 lines, and 6 lines, with a refrain line repeated after each stanza. There are no meterical or rhyme scheme requirements for this form. I have written the first stanza, the refrain line, “Forgotten better days and a badly written play” and the first two lines of stanza two. You task is the complete the second stanza, add my refrain after it and then write the third stanza. The development of the poem is to present a problem in stanza #1, expand or explore it in stanza #2, and then either resolve or reveal a failed attempt as resolution in the last stanza. Good luck and happy poeming! ~Jilly
FORGOTTEN BETTER DAYS ( a Bop)
Smoke gathers round the rim of my coffee cup remnants of the skirmish in my untouched bowl of cereal your suitcase sits by the door, the new leather one not the weary worn green canvas with tags from our trip to Paris last summer leaving me with a million
Forgotten better days and a badly written play
Blurred words seep through the wall you on the phone with some unknown
Welcome My Poetic Friends! The NEW Casting Bricks Challenge is now open for the month of August. I am so excited about a new round of collaborative poetry. The July Challenge was a huge success, we had a great deal of fun, connected with other poets, and were stretched in our writing skills. Based on the feedback and interest expressed, we are here again for a new set of poems. Here is how it works:
Write a half poem and post it to your blog with a link or tag back to this page (Jilly’s August Challenge).
If your Challenge poem is a form (sonnet, quadrille, etc.) please state as such and give a quick review of the form or a link to a site that does that for you.
Stop by here and add your Challenge link to our Mr. Linky.
Find other Challenges that you would like to complete.
Write the 2nd half of their poem and post the entire poem to your blog.
Return here to our Mr. Linky again and post the link to that completed poem.
You may also want to put a comment on the other person’s original Challenge post to let them know you have accepted their challenge.
Spread the word! Extend the invitation to your other poet friends to join us. We are a crazy, friendly bunch, after all!
NOTE: In order to keep the links for Challenges (your half poem) different from the links for the Completed Poems, I suggest the following: When posting your Challenge half poem, post the name you would normally use along with the word ‘Challenge’ behind it. ex: Jilly Challenge.
When posting the link for a Completed Challenge, post your user name & the name of the person whose Challenge you completed. ex: Jilly Colin (if I am completing a challenge put out there by our good friend Colin Lee.)
Questions? Suggestions? Just drop it into the Comments on this page and I’ll do my best to address it.
There is no expiration on our Mr. Linky, so feel free to post new challenges and completed challenges throughout the month. Feel free to complete as many or as few challenges as you feel comfortable with. Most importantly, have fun & flex your poetic muscles! Cheers! ~ Jilly
Day 19 of the 28 Days of Unreason brings a return of Silly Jilly, my childish alter ego. Humor her; she gets cranky when she’s told to grow up and act her age. I’m just guessing she wanted to break from poetic tradition about using birds for metaphors and symbolic crap like that. Views expressed here are not necessarily those of the author. Songs of Unreason yields a beautiful quote for today:
“The birds are a chorus…clearly relatives of Mozart” ~ Jim Harrison
CACOPHONY OF BIRDS
they sync ‘neath my window
from sunrise ‘til noon
put up such a racket
like a bellowing moose
the shrike and the snipe
I’d most like to strike
with a silencing muzzle
my nerves are a fuzzle!
the starlings most startling
the grackles a ’cackle
the raven shows up
with a tool belt and spackle
(to fix and repair a bust standing there)
oh, where can I go
I need a good sleeper
but when I lie down
along comes a creeper
at last downs the sun
at evening they rest
but alas that screech owl
busts his buttons and vest
On Mozart and Handel
Now Beethoven and Bach
fly away, fly away
put thy beaks in a sock!
Frank has us working with tri-meter over at dVerse; please join us! I have chosen to write a Bop – a fun form that I haven’t done for many months. It is 3 stanzas with a refrain after each. There is no required meter or rhyme scheme for the Bop, although I impose Frank’s Tri-Meter here and add my own rhymes. Three stanzas with 6 / 8 / 6 lines in which you present a problem in the 1st, expand or explore it in the 2nd, and resolve or reveal a failed attempt at resolution in the last stanza.
A dark and stormy knight
rode into town that day
in answer to a call
of anguished hearts dismay
upon his stead he rode
through mists the hooves explode
A foe to vanquish there
The villagers called out
the children hid and cried
there was no peace for they
saw courage there denied
a monster was at large
with terror in its fists
and so our knight was charged
with deeds of daring tryst
A foe to vanquish there
His eyes flashed bright with fire
as the foe came into view
to light a funeral fire
was not the course he chose
‘stead roses he did ply
the maiden did comply