Whoop! Day 28!!! A few days ago I was musing over the fact that so many of my poems are about nature, the moon, & etc. “Why don’t I write about something mundane, like that bent Road Work Ahead sign or a traffic light?” My mind composed this in the wee small hours and it seems a fitting finality to these amazing 28 Days of Unreason. Once again, the words of Jim Harrison from Songs of Unreason have been mind-expanding and a true source of inspiration. Thank you to all who have joined in, some every day and others as the muse prompts. Lynn, Charley & Qbit have been amazingly faithfull to the prompts and the light of my day for 28 of them. Jane has caught the fever as well as Frank, Jenna, Hank, Jeren, and NoStAugustine. Did I miss anyone? The response has overjoyed me! Where should we go next? Rilke? Whitman? (I need a vacation! LOL) Love Y’all! ~ Jilly
“Why does the mind compose this music well before the words occur?”
~ Jim Harrison
THE MAGI
Approaching,
I will the light,
“Stay green. Stay green.”
It yellows.
Red.
Mindjackers surround the car
wrench open my door
their mouths open
singing music
with words I
cannot hear,
the rib-spreader
in their Magus hands.
I stare straight ahead,
grip the wheel;
the car behind me honks.
Green.
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This is beautiful, jilly. I too feel the same way about appreciating small things and it kinda brings out our character. I loved reading this beautiful little poem about traffic
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You have some weird daydreams! I know what you mean though. I hate traffic. Brilliant end to the series, and thanks for all the prompts. When I’m up to day 28 I’ll go back to the beginning to see what I missed 🙂
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There is a Category for the 28 Days here at Jilly’s, so they are all there! Tickled that you warmed up to the poor bloke. 🙂
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I’m knitting him a muffler right now 🙂
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Ha!
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🙂
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“rib-spreader in their Magus hands”!! “Mindjackers”!! So great! The expansion is song through your body, the gifts of the Magi, terrifying, the fearful exctasy.
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Thank you! This is one of my favorites from the 28.
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Agreed, right up there. We all got some really good work out there during this. High fives all around. I have today and 4-5 missed ones to catch up on. I’m a little crispy though. I can’t believe you started the Challenge last week!
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Crispy? lay off those apples, already! 🙂 The one you posted to OLN on Thursday is your best, from my perspective, although… Drayage and Charwoman… and….
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Mind-jacking muses… armed with rib spreaders to do open-heart inspiration! As poems sing themselves toward paper and ink, the darned light changes. Beautiful, Jilly! And awefully Harrisonian.
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Exactly!
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The parting shots:
https://imagery77.blogspot.my/2017/08/be-aware-of-clue-bearing-magi-signs.html
Thanks, Jillys Ma’am for the prompts provided though Hank came by at the halfway point. Will wait for your future ones
Hank
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So glad you have been a part of our unreasonable days, Hank! You are most welcome to join in with the Casting Bricks Challenge if it interests you. It is collaborative poetry. There is a link on the right sidebar of Jilly’s.
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Congratulations on completing the 28 days. Nice description of approaching the light, the mindjackers and being honked by the car behind.
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Thank you! So glad you joined in, Frank. Your poetry and photos are always amazing and always a highlight of my reading. 🙂
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There needs to be a ‘Muse on Board’ sign for cars.
This might be one of my favorites of yours, too. If I could possibly pick one. They’ve all been brilliant and I’m glad to have been a part of these days of unreason.
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One of the highlights of my day has been reading your poem on the quote! I love your bumper sticker idea – that means you totally got this!
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I feel the same about your poems! I’m still working on yesterday’s quote. I’m so slow. Somebody totally needs to make that bumper sticker! I did get it and I love it. 🙂
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Of course you got – we are poetic twins 🙂
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Poetic twins, love that.
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https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/08/16/children-of-the-stars/
Back to the beginning now 🙂
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