“Casting Bricks to Attract Jade”
Hello my Friends and Fellow Poets. Welcome to the July Challenge!
(UPDATE: Scroll to the bottom for a listing of the links to each challenge submitted!)
Many of us have expressed a desire to continue writing and sharing our work with one another during the time when the Poet’s Pub over at dVerse is closed and it fit nicely with a conversation I had with Colin Lee a short time ago. Idioms are a fascination for me, especially those from other languages and cultures, so when Colin shared a Chinese idiom with me, I had to do a bit of research to find out what it meant and where it originated. The idiom is “Casting bricks to tease jade out of the master.” I was pleasantly surprised to discover that its origins are in poetry. Here’s the story from Changing Minds
Meaning:
“…this idea I’m tossing out there is just a brick, but perhaps it will lead one of you to contribute jade.” It’s a humble way to contribute to a conversation…”
History:
“In the Tang dynasty, the poet Chang Jian wanted to the learn from the great poet, Zhao Gu. He wrote half a poem on a temple wall where Zhao was visiting, hoping the better poet would complete it, which Zhao did.”
This got me wondering what it would be like to write collaborative poetry. The July Challenge is basically this: Write half of a poem and open it up to fellow Challengers to finish it. Since we are all fabulous poets, the greater challenge of this will not be the poetry, but the logistics, so I am including the steps.
- Write the first half of a poem
- Post it on your blog with a link back here to The July Challenge
- Include a little something about the form you are using. Is it Free Verse, Sonnet, Quadrille, etc?
- If you are using a form, please give a link to a site that explains that form or just give a little refresher.
Example: This is a Sonnet which has 14 total lines, 3 quatrains and a couplet with a rhyme scheme of abab/cdcd/efef/gg. I am writing the first 7 lines; please write the last 7.
- Return here to Jilly’s July Challenge Post and in the comments tell everyone the name of your Challenge Post and a link to it. (Copy & past the URL for the post.)
- Browse through the other comments and find someone’s Challenge that you would like to complete.
- Copy & paste their 1st half, write the 2nd half, and then post the whole poem. Give them credit for their portion and include a link back to their blog.
- Stop back at Jilly’s July Challenge (right here) and share the link to your completed poem in the comments.
- Repeat as desired.
I know this is a little bit like going around in blogging circles, so hopefully we won’t get too tied up in knots!
Charley at Life in Portofino did a test run with me on Friday when I posted Sonnet by 2 and he completed it. There was a bonus added when qbit picked up on the challenge and posted another version.
Please let me know if you have questions! When in doubt, link everywhere and anywhere you think would help share the fun around. Everyone is welcome to join in! We are just a bunch of happy writers having fun with words!
Cheers, Jilly
UPDATE! Here is a listing (to date) of those who have put out challenge poems for others to complete. I will add to this list as new half-poems become available. If I’ve missed anyone, please give me a shout. Jilly
From Charley:
https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/02/july-challenge-a-quadrille/
From Frank:
https://frankhubeny.blog/2017/06/29/home-tour/
From Lynn:
https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/fancy-perfume-and-twirling-ribbons/
From Colin:
https://pescetarianpoet.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/july-challenge-antithetical-couplet/
From Victoria:
https://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/jillys-july-challenge-collaborative-poetry/
From Jeren:
https://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/tanaga-by-2-incomplete/
From Jenna (Revived Writer):
https://revivedwriter.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/july-challenge-sail
https://revivedwriter.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/july-challenge-san-san/ (An exciting 2nd challenge!)
From qbit:
https://qbit.blog/2017/07/05/july-challenge-dark-sonnet/
From Nosaintaugstine:
https://nosaintaugustine.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/the-old-hum/
From Petru (petrujviljoen)
https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/song/
From Jilly (the Pre-Challenge example):
https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/06/30/sonnet-by-2/
This sounds just perfect! I’m so excited for it. I can’t wait for someone to finish my poem. Great job on the challenge, jilly! I’m going to love it.
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Woo hoo! Welcome, Jeren, glad you are joining in.
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Once your half-poem is posted to your blog, just stop back here with the link. 🙂
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Definitely jilly, I’ll be back soon!
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Hey, Jill! I really like this challenge. Here is my link for any poet wanting to do the challenge: https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/02/july-challenge-a-quadrille/
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Hooray! Welcome Charley!
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I have a second half for this which I will post tomorrow to coincide with a photo prompt due on Monday. However, I hope others give it a try as well.
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Way cool! I can’t wait to see it.
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And here it is: https://frankhubeny.blog/2017/07/03/july-challenge-and-alien-artifacts/
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Here’s my take:
https://pescetarianpoet.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/platonic-melancholy/
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Looking forward to reading. Glad you are here, Colin!
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A great take from what I began! I can’t wait to see your first half offering!
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My offering offered!
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Hey Charley! I completed your quadrille blending 2 great pieces of literature 🙂
https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/long-john-gets-poe-etic/
Thanks for the 1st half.
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Here’s my version, https://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/465/
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Sorry! I just got back to this. Not sure how I missed it, but I did. Reading now….
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It’s alright! There was a lot of comments.
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Yes there was! But it was a hectic day also.
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Reblogged this on itsallaboutnothingg and commented:
I think this is going to be really fun, so everybody join us! For some interactive poetic experience.
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This sounds like a lot of fun! I shall return once I get my half-poem posted.
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Awesome!
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This was my last poem, Home Tour. It is four lines of common meter or a “trova”. It could be expanded to an eight light poem, so from that perspective half of it is done and waiting for someone to finish it. https://frankhubeny.blog/2017/06/29/home-tour/
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Wonderful idea, Frank! Glad you are joining in 🙂
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I did just a bit more research on the form and am working on a second half that I will post tomorrow. I have a book of medieval poetry and once I brought that to mind the meter fell into place for me.
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Here is a completed Challenge for Home Tour. Thanks for the great first stanza on this one, Frank! https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/2747/
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Frank, I just posted my attempt at completing your poem, Home Tour. I hope I kept the voice and tone. https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/july-challenge-with-frankhubeny/
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Very nice, Charley! I think you kept the voice and tone of the first part through your second half.
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I’m glad. I would hate to have taken it off to the right or left.
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Hello Frank, I completed your poem, here’s the link, http://wp.me/p8znfS-8r
Your thoughts are much appreciated.
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I’ve done this before, a long time ago and it is fun and surprising. I’ll see what I can come up with.
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I’m so pleased!
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Jilly’s July Challenge! Got a nice ring to it having your name and the month alliterated and visually rhymed — you’re destined to host this, Jill. Anyway, thanks for being such a good sport.
This sounds dangerously fun — having a month-long snowball fight in midsummer with bricks and stones and gems and crystals instead! I’ll come up with something simple and Chinesey, I think … Hmm …
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Wonderful image for what we are doing here! Looking forward to your challenge, Colin.
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I wrote the first half of a sonnet in anagram form. I hope having to deal with two forms isn’t enough to scare anyone off. Here’s my link for any poet who wants to play along: https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/fancy-perfume-and-twirling-ribbons/
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Love the challenge! Glad you have joined in 🙂
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Glad to have joined. Thanks for the challenge.
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I had a go, but didn’t do the anagram bit, sorry…but this is what I did:
https://aspoonfulofsugar337.com/2017/07/03/fancy-perfume-and-twirling-ribbons/
Hope this is okay- cheers Alison XX
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Alison, I am SO glad you have joined in!
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Lynn, I wrote my half of your sonnet. Here’s the link: https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/july-challenge-with-l-burton/
I hope I kept the spirit you had in mind!
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I think you kept the spirit just fine. I especially like that last line. Thanks for being up to the challenge, even though you wanted to run away. 🙂
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Yeah, well my feet hurt… Glad it worked out!
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I attempted to complete the poem that Colourfulpen had begun. I missed the anagram bit though as I was too eager of the block and hadn’t fully understood what I was supposed to be doing…however this is my offering..
https://aspoonfulofsugar337.com/2017/07/03/fancy-perfume-and-twirling-ribbons/
Kind regards
Alison XX
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Here’s my dare for the culturally adventurous. Come on in and have a look. It’s fun!
https://pescetarianpoet.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/july-challenge-antithetical-couplet/
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A dare! I’ll be stopping by to see if I am brave enough 🙂
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You know you are! 😉
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I somehow finished your poem. Please check it out and be free to spot any mistakes or share all kinds of feedbacks! It was such a fun.
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Thank you so much for your participation, Jeren!
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My pleasure!
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I forgot to paste the link, so here it is, https://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/antithetical-couplets-my-two-hours-insanity-jillys-july-challenge/
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I just posted mine: https://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/jillys-july-challenge-collaborative-poetry/ Now, I’m off to see what’s out there.
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Hooray!
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Such a wonderful experience to complete your poem, Victoria! Here is my response:
https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/mirror-mirror-who-am-i/
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Hey everyone, this is my first half of the poem. It’s a Tanaga with four lines on each stanza with 7 syllables each line with a rhyme scheme Abba, check it out here, https://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/tanaga-by-2-incomplete/
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I will try to write the second half of this poem.
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Here is my completion of this poem. I still have not written my own first half.
https://revivedwriter.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/july-collaboration-challenge/
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Yay! I’m happy to hear that and so excited to read!
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Hooray! I’m thrilled you are joining in, my friend 🙂
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Hey Jeren! So glad you are here 🙂 I’ll be around to take up your challenge.
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I’m happy to hear that. When you are free!
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Awesome form! Here is the Jilly version:
https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/tanaga-by-2-jj/
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I’m excited to read it!
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Jilly, I wrote the second half of your Sonnet by 2. Here’s the link: https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/july-challenge-sonnet-by-2/
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Oh, cool! Ya know, I went to bed kind of early last night and I thought I heard music and laughter somewhere in my dreams. Got up this morning and glanced at the comments and realized y’all were up partying most of the night in the Challenge 🙂
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It is a fun challenge. I finally finished my half a little after midnight, then fell asleep listening to a wicked storm.
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That makes for wicked dreams! I sat out on the back porch yesterday afternoon while a storm raged; exhilarating!
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It does! Too bad I don’t remember them if I had any. I was hoping maybe something magical would pop up since I finally finished watching the last Harry Potter movie earlier in the day. I’d seen bits and pieces of all the movies before and we recorded them when they were on during the Memorial Day weekend. Of course, I can’t even marathon properly.
Me: Ooo, let’s watch Harry Potter (or any movie). *gets comfy* …zzzz.
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HA! Irony: I retook a House Placement quiz yesterday – in spite of the change, I still wear green 😉
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Slytherin, eh? I need to take me a House Placement quiz.
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I think I was just in a mood the day that first happened. Yesterday it put me in Ravenclaw, which is much more accurate. However, when we all get together to play HP Clue, I play that Slytherin card for the fun of it. “Don’t mess with me; you know which house I’m in!” tee hee
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Hmm, I just got Hufflepuff. I didn’t know there was a HP Clue. I’ll have to look for it.
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Aw! That means you are kind and nice and value your family and friends. The clue game is complicated, but fun. HP World at Universal is a blast and a half! They all think you are a Weasley if you are a red-head.
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That I do. I bet it is fun. And HP World even more fun! Ha, my two year old granddaughter would definitely be considered a Weasley.
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Whew! I took up Lynn’s double challenge! Here it is: https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/fancy-perfume-twirling-ribbons-deux/
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This is my first half. Thanks for hosting this challenge, Jill!
https://revivedwriter.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/july-challenge-sail
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Awesome! I will add your link to my update on the July Challenge page. Hosting this is my pleasure and I’m glad you are here 🙂
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I finished your poem here, you will see how much I enjoyed it when you read the post
. https://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/471/
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Jilly–Maureen Sudlow in New Zealand added to mine in a comment. I don’t think she hopped into the challenge yet. Here is what she wrote (it’s not on her blog).
I am the crumpled fading leaves
the glint of sun on foam-capped waves
I am the dust of planets born
Her link (to her blog) is https://kiwis-soar.com/
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Thanks! I stopped by here blog – what photos! I also invited her to join us! (Looking forward to diving into your poem very soon, myself.)
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Continued Charlie’s Raven theme… http://qbit.blog/2017/07/04/july-challenge-charliequadrille/
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Jilly, I checked out Mr. Linky. I set mine up so many years ago, I don’t remember what to do. All I can suggest is to go to blenza.com. What you want is a simple button linky. You want Wizard then choose WordPress as the blog you use. That’s when you can choose Button Linky and select a password. I think it pretty well talks you through it. dVerse has a more complex one that is paid for but the simple one works well for what I do, though I haven’t used it much since I began to spend so much time on dVerse. Hope this helps.
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Batman, Superman, Victoria; now all you need is a cape 🙂 Thank you!
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Shucks…I’m afraid of heights!
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Sounds like a sequel in the making: Batman Walks. 🙂
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Charley, I completed your quadrille. https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/04/july-challenge-a-quadrille/
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OK, here is my entry. http://qbit.blog/2017/07/05/july-challenge-dark-sonnet
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YES! A dark sonnet – the best of all worlds. I am adding your link to the Challenge page listing and am itching to write. Welcome, my friend!
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Can’t wait!
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Oh my, Jill! How’re you keeping up with all this? I completed revivedwriter’s (Jenna’s) challenge. https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/july-challenge-sail-charleys-attempt/
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Keeping up? I’m supposed to keep up? 🙂
Let’s see, too much coffee in when the sun is in the east, switching to wine when the shadows fall that way, howling at the rising moon, walking in the rain.
Looking forward to reading your completion of Jenna’s poem!
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Frank, I completed the second half of your “Home Tour” poem. Here’s the link: https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/july-challenge-home-tour/
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Ok folks, anything goes with my poem- it’s a free-for-all on the subject of memory. I literally could not end it so I can’t wait to see what you come up with! Here is the short link: The Old Hum http://wp.me/p8GM4F-l3
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YAY! I’m adding your link to the July Challenge page. Looking forward to it 🙂
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Sailed into Jenna’s Tanaga Challenge:
https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/sail-trimmed/
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Here’s my second half to Qbit’s Dark Sonnet:
http://wp.me/p8GM4F-lh
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Cool! I’m working on that one now – will read yours when I finish.
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Hello again! I posted another first-half of a poem for the challenge.
https://revivedwriter.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/july-challenge-san-san/
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Wonderful! I’m trying to spread the word that I have a list of the challenges and I am updating them often. The are here on the July Challenge page, toward the bottom. I will add this one and look forward to it!
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Here’s my response to Victoria’s challenge: https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/who-am-i-you-ask-charleys-attempt/
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And… my response to Qbit’s sonnet. https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/dark-sonnet-at-dantes-casino/
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Here’s my response to The Old Hum by Nosaintaugustine.
https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/the-old-hum-collaboration/
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So glad you stopped by the July Challenge. I look forward to reading this as soon as I finish writing the same.
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Completed NoSaintAugustine’s Challenge! Here is the link: https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/old-hum-more-mumbling/
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And here is my attempt at Nosaintaugustine’s challenge: https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/the-old-hum-reasonating/
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For nosaint’s. http://qbit.blog/2017/07/07/old-hum-true-tales-of-the-west
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Here’s my attempt at qbit’s challenge: https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/july-challenge-dark-sonnet/
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Hooray! Been missing you; figured it meant you were hanging our with that Noland dude.
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Been missing you, too! Yes, that Noland dude and I are having some interesting adventures, but your challenge is still more fun. 🙂
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I’ll be the one at the front of the line for the release party.
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And the wine will flow. 🙂 Thank you for the support and encouragement. Much appreciated!
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Wine? I can do that.
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🙂
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Hi Jilly. Herewith link to a first half. https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/song/
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Wonderful! I will post your link here on the Challenge page. Look forward to it.
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I hope you approve of the direction I took your most beautiful words. It was a singularly satisfying write for me. Thank you! https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/song-a-displacement/
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I ‘answered Lynn Burton’s anagram poem: https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/fancy-perfume-and-twirling-ribbons-collaboration-with-lburton/
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My Antithetical Couplet: http://qbit.blog/2017/07/08/july-challenge-anathema-couplet
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My attempt at nosaint’s challenge. https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/july-challenge-the-old-hum-drum/
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Still another take on the Antithetical Couplets… https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/antithetical-redux-colin-and-charley/
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Here is my take on Revived Writer’s (Jenna) 2nd challenge, the San-San. https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/san-san-completed/
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Hi! This is what I came up with for Petru’s poem. https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/song-nature-over-nurture-anytime/
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Slowly making my way through the last few half poems. Here’s my attempt at Jenna’s. https://lburtonwrites.wordpress.com/2017/07/11/july-challenge-sail/
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Hooray!
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