Writing Quadrilles using the word ‘echo’ over at d’Verse tonight.
I blended that with Palindrome writing.
Words trounce sunflowers blooming full yellow golden heads sunward
Turning
Sunward heads golden yellow full blooming sunflowers trounce words
Hands bleeding honey dripping dew buzz bees buzz with
Echoes
With buzz bees buzz dew dripping honey bleeding hands
Turning echoes
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This was a lot of fun to read aloud.
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Thanks! I read it aloud to my dog and she seemed disinterested. Go figure 🙂 Tee Hee!
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Really? My dog had lots of follow-up questions…. 🙂
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HAHA! My dog embodies disdain. True critic, she! Tell your dog all the answers involve food and maybe a walk. That should cover it 🙂
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Whistles!!!❤️❤️ My goodness you totally took it to the next level! 😀
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Thank you! I seem to be entrenchd in forms these days.
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I love the echoes and repeating patterns here. Palindrome is hard to do. I love this.
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It is tough and it’s been on my list unfinished for way too long. Thanks for assuming the Muse role today!
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This is fabulous Jilly! :o) xxx
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You’re killing me today! Or maybe that’s everyday. Not an easy form. LOVE everything about this.
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Oh! That’s a song que if ever I heard one…
(Go ahead, sing along!)
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Ha! I’m gonna have that song stuck in my head for the rest of the evening.
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Then my work here is done 🙂
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Hate to be a “yes” man, but I am in agreement with the consensus! Wonderful poem and mastery of form, Jilly!
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Thanks, Walt! Glad you stopped by for a read 🙂
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Wonderful blend of two forms that left me smiling.
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Thanks for poeming by today, Victoria!
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Quite the impressive achievement–aced the prompt & the form, creating an active & fun read; smile.
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Thanks, Glenn! Glad you stopped by to read 🙂
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What a challenge you have set for yourself Jilly ~ Love the words echoing back and forth ~
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A palindrome echos itself.
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love how the words and lines drip into each other, and that sunflower so beautiful and irresistible
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Thanks! Those sunflowers are sitting on my kitchen table and needed to be shot before they die – which is any moment now 🙂 They also demanded I put them in a poem… who am I to argue with a flower?
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Wow! Palindromes fit well with the echo theme and they aren’t easy. I like how sunflowers trounce words and words trounce sunflowers, touching on how art and subject echo/interact.
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Thanks Janice! I started with those two words (trounce words) and a vase of dying sunflowers in my kitchen and it just kinda flowed out of an exhausting Monday! Glad you stopped by!
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Ah what a challenge upon yourself… and so well done,
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Thanks! I love forms, so it was fun.
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So clever! Palindromes defy ordinary talent!
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On the way down here to leave my comment, I had to stop and listen to Killer Queen…I love Queen! Thanks for that. 🙂 Palindromes are tricky…you pulled it off beautifully with echoes of sunflowers and buzzing bees, fun.
Gayle ~
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Thanks, Gayle! Rock on 🙂
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