We are, by Kim’s encouragment, charged with transforming
a pop lyric into a Sonnet of Elizabethan language (Pop Sonnets!)
Join us at dVerse for some mirth!
Canst thou guess my chosen magdrigal?
Rememberest I when my mind didst part its function
Pleasing was’t to dwell in that bright land
As from Mount Cithaeron hast emanated of thy heart’s dwelling place
Were framed in so much vastness
As when thou art upon thy fields
Where dost no care reside
Where I was’t parted from mine own knowledge
Not because I did’st know too little
Mine own mind was replete with much
Am I thus without sensible function?
Am I thus without mine own mind’s grasp?
Am I thus without sensible function?
Am I thus without mine own mind’s grasp?
‘Tis like unto the truth
I wisheth for thou the spirit of this life to fill thee
Whilst advisable to use thy function of sensibility
and use it again
Dost thou knowest thyself?
Who dost thou believest thyself to be?
With mirth I bless thee
As thou believest thyself to holdest the helm of thy life
I believest thou to be without thy sensibilities
Without thy sensibilities
As mine own sensibilities are thus lost to me
As mine own sensibilities are thus lost to me
© Jilly’s 4/13/2017
In the US: https://youtu.be/bd2B6SjMh_w
Over the pond, just check out Gnarles Barkley “Crazy”
Let’s dance, Yall! Jilly
I love that you have written in Olde English, Jilly, and I’m enjoying myself trying to work out what the pop song is. It might take a while…
Something about losing your mind but I’m not sure how Mount Cithaeron comes into it.
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Hint: Greek Mythology
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Is it ‘Crazy’ by Gnarls Barkley?
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Give the bar keep a cookie! A Crazy Cookie! Good job 🙂
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Thanks Jilly!
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Kim, you are SO good at guessing these.
Jilly, I really enjoyed your use of the old english language.
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I’m with Kim…I think it’s crazy.
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Right you are! Y’all are crazy smart 🙂
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I so admire the Ole English verses ~ I’m lost though with the title of the song ~
Thanks for taking up our pop sonnet challenge Jilly ~ Happy Easter ~
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Thank you, Grace. Happy Easter to you, as well!
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I used to be an actor, but I never retained the ability to write in Olde English. I’m genuinely impressed so many of you can. I’m not familiar with the song guessed either. Regardless, your sonnet was fun, & mythology
is in there somewhere.
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Glenn, I teach high school English – specifically Brit lit, so I’m in it daily, otherwise I wouldn’t be able to do it, either!
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Love the language, love the refrain. So well written for the prompt. Again, batting 1000 here not catching any of the songs….but the phrase, “going out of my mind, over you” keeps running through my head from some song….????
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I love that song… You’re just too good to be true, can’t take my eyes off of you… but this sonnet is based on a song from 2006. I took Kim seriously when she said ‘modern.’ Although, the going out of your mind part is certainly in my song… try synonyms… 😉
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I just listened to ‘Crazy’ by Gnarls Barkley that Kim suggested. It’s the first time I heard that song which makes me think I should listen to more music. So I will guess that one as well. Nice putting all those Shakespearean English sounding words in your sonnet.
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Ah! I’ve caused you to listen to Gnarls Barkley – my work here is done! tee hee.
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Very cool. I actually did not recognize it, but I have heard the song and now listened to the words and your Sonnet is perfect. So for others:
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I don’t know how you’re able to do the old English language, and I’m equally impressed and envious! That aside, this was a really good sonnet. Unfortunately, I don’t know what song this is…but I still enjoyed reading this 🙂
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Thank you! The song is Crazy by Gnarls Barkley. https://youtu.be/bd2B6SjMh_w
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I see you write Fan Fiction! I have students who are really into that genre – will stop by and read soon:)
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Yes, I do dabble in fanfiction! Excited to read your thoughts on some of them 😀
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Jilly… I went crazy trying to guess this. And this is one of my favorite songs! Once I read it, it all fell together.
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thank you for introducing me to an artist I have never heard before, old English is something I need to read more than once but you have arranged the words in such lovely order it was a pleasure to read them, especially the use of repetition at the end
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Thank you! I read Elizabethan English almost daily since I teach High School Lit – so I kinda cheated 🙂
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it seemed to flow with much ease and I envy you have this amazing skill now I know you teach it daily, its such a beautiful way to express oneself.
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How’s your Middle English? I’m hoping nobody ever asks us to have a go at that! Didn’t get the song, but that’s par for the course with me. It was fun reading though 🙂
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The song is Crazy by Gnarls Barkley – it’s from 2006. https://youtu.be/bd2B6SjMh_w
When I was in college I read OE – like a new language. Forgotten it all! Oh, well…
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OE is like Viking speak. I have a feeling that if I heard it (being brought up in Yorkshire) it would sound familiar, but seeing it written down with all those odd signs, it means very little.
I know that song, but I’ve never listened to the words. That’s true about most pop songs—the words sound like gibberish.
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I gave it a try – hopeless.
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I couldn’t open your link. Was it Beowolf read by a Goth?
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It was – sorry about that. Youtube links have limits when crossing the pond.
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I wonder if that’s the reason. Some links work and others don’t but I’ve never noticed how far they’ve travelled. Beowolf in unfathomable. I can never remember what the non-Latin signs sound like.
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Impressive English double talk!
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LOL! I dig that old slang, ya know 🙂 Thanks for reading!
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I love that Gnarls Barkley song, but never would’ve guessed that’s what it was. Your words flowed so seamlessly.
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Okay, here’s the real hoot – we went to dinner tonight and the guy at the keyboard was singing Crazy as we sat down. We laughed at the timing 🙂
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Oh wow, that is funny! I’ve had to listen to that song multiple times today. It’s just that good.
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Yep, me too.
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I didn’t get this one or know this song but a good sonnet all the same! What fun this prompt was!
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Glad you stopped by!
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Anytime!
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