I feel guilty indulging in
depression or is it
just malaise?
in Florida
in February
I mean
after all those people with
dry skin enduring
late-season snow blackened
by ill-use and exhaust
while I sit
back on my lawn chair pondering a weeping
palm against
a cloud lit orange by the reflective
lights of Orlando sipping
wine wondering
how a year has
Passed
since flying into O’Hare
racing unsuccessfully
to beat out the storm
of the year
on I-94
wondering if a funeral can be snowed
out.
© Jilly's
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I feel guilty indulging in depression even in Chicago, but I have been on I-94 with the snow coming down, or heavy rain. The worst is being on I-94 in slow traffic.
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We wrapped around the end of the Lake in a rental car with bad tires in a blizzard. Of course, it’s like riding a bike – even decades later. Only a funeral would get me back in February.
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Oh, that last line is powerful. Well done, Jilly.
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Thank you!
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The life of a snowbird is complicated. I-94 is a motorized torture chamber, by the way~ in my humble opinion!
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Actually, we aren’t snow birds. We live in Florida but had to travel to Michigan for my Mom’s funeral. The irony, even a year later, drifted like snow. Love your description of 94! Thanks for reading 🙂
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That last line has a kick to it, Jilly!
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Thanks Kim. The reality was a kick in the chest.
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I wanted to respond earlier to your poem, Jill. The irony of sympathizing with those who suffer in the not-so-great white north while dealing with your own cold reality — the loss of a loved one. And the kicker, “…wondering if a funeral can be snowed
out.”
Irony CAN be humorous. In this case, irony can be heart-stopping.
What a great poem, Jill.
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Thank you!
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Poor you who have to suffer the dreaded Orlando sunset with a glass of whine… no give me Liverpool in November… 🙂
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🙂
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Just love the close – brilliant!
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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As I write this, it is a cold and chilling winter blast, instead of spring ~ Enjoy your weekend ~
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Brrr! Enjoy yours as well 🙂
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