The calculated unpredictable dissonance of Monk balloons off the living room walls as we toast marshmallows arguing about whether you or I are right-brained or left wondering if that bird that launched from the trees across the lake were an eagle or early owlPoem & Photo © Jilly's 2016 A Quadrille Join us over at dVerse!
The cadence of this makes my ears so happy, Jilly. Such fun word bump, and awesome images.
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This is wonderful… I could hear the jazz and the wild discussions… really innovative.
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Thank you!
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A peek at a typical scene, poetically presented. Well done!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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Nice use of the word. It sounds like an interesting evening…
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Thanks Sarah! It’s a typical evening ’round here. Bit of jazz, bit of wine, bit of solving the problems of the world. Glad you stopped by!
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What a wonderful poem! Jazz plays while we talk…
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Thank you! Jazz is the soundtrack, indeed!
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🙂
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A lovely cadence here, Jilly ❤️
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Thank you!
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I like the idea of the music bouncing off the walls like a balloon while arguing about right or left brain and eagle or early-owl.
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Thank you, Frank! I thought they all ran together – or were dissonant 🙂 Monk, either way!
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Such an effective voice in this. Really like the idea of unpredictable dissonance…bouncing off the wall.
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Thanks, Victoria!
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Seems like a good place to be, arguing with the music background ~ Good use of the word Jilly~
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Thanks, Grace!
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I thought Monk was the dog barking at the bird on the other side of the lake, it’s a great way to tell a story
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Oh! What a great name for my next dog! I’m a jazz lover and Thelonious Monk is a fav! OK, now I have to go back and read it from that perspective 🙂 Thanks for stopping by and adding the joy of this!
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OK, now I understand. I’m not a jazz lover. That makes more sense, thanks!
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Sounds like pretty mellow, low-key arguing going on there. Doesn’t jazz keep you kind of chill? 🙂
Gayle ~
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Hmmm… depends on the jazz, I guess. But it does make for great conversation, and you are right, we debate but never argue. Nice to see you Gayle!
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A perfect evening!
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Love the imagery! 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by, Maria!
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A cozy atmosphere. I like the idea of Monk ballooning off the walls.
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Quite the balloon conversation 😉
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Haha! I love hanging out with those who play with words 🙂
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Oh my…how to calculate unpredictability??? Marvelous turn of phrase and it just flows from there. Nice one.
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Jazz is the only way I know to do that math, and Monk was the c-c-coolest c-c-cat!
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your title drew me in, your words made me stay
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Glad you stopped by!
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