Post rain the lake
Reflects butter clouds, avocado woods, Stilton sky
Impenetrable hues Moneted in twilight
Pre-breakfast the bowl
Holds northern firmament berries, cumulous yogurt, oak-bark granola
Profuse tones Flayed in daybreak
Opus mornings dance across the staff toward concerto nights
© Jilly’s 2016 Words & Photos
Stop by dVerse Poet’s Pub for a musical bit of Sevenling!
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Jilly, this is just breathtaking. This line, especially, got my attention:
Reflects butter clouds, avocado woods, Stilton sky
I love how you tied in the music theme.
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I admire the lyrical description of clouds, wood, sky, and that breakfast bowl – yummy! Love the morning dance from twilight to daybreak ~
Thanks for joining us Jilly!!
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Thanks!
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ok, i am hungry now. stilton, as in stilton cheese? i googled and that is what it came up with…
nice use of monet as a verb too. ha. sounds like you live in a beautiful place.
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Yep – Stilton cheese! Had fun writing this one! And, yes, very beautiful here in Orlando. The sky is always a new painting. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Oh how I admire and love this poem. Music and food references, Monet as a verb….there is nothing to dislike in this and everything to love.
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Thanks!
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How beautiful this is with the gentle references to music that plays throughout the day into the night. I love your descriptions using food for the lake scene and then your nature references for the yogurt, berries and granola. Yes, maybe a snack is needed now!
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Love the way in which you knitted together the things in nature with your breakfast and then wove in the music. Gentle and beautiful!
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Thank you, my friend!
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nice… a beautiful awakening landscape and a good breakfast… i love berries… almond milk instead of yogurt though for me as i am vegan… smiles
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Love the almond milk, too!
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Every line of this is stunning. I especially like the butter clouds and avocado woods.
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Thank you 🙂
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This is absolutely incredible writing Jilly 😀 love the images here.
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Thank you! High praise indeed 🙂
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Oh I do love how you go from those descriptions of nature seamlessly merge to the breakfast bowl… wonderful
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Thanks, Bjorn!
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hey you Moneted with word hues…and added music to it…Whew!
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Love to ‘verb’ a noun for twist 🙂 Thanks for reading!
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So well done! Especially LOVE that last line 🙂
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Thanks, Lillian 🙂
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What a lovely, complex mix of nature and food, music, and the rhythm of day and night.
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I loved the food/nature/music combination – and now I’m hungry!
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AW! C’mon over; we’ll cook 😉
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A poetic menu to music!
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You were cooking when you wrote this poem, Jilly! Beautiful imagery. Beautiful irony.
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HA HA! You are so punny 🙂
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