“…in the black changing sound of night, the enormous Florida night, metallic with cicadas, musical and dangerous as the human heart.” Lynda Hull from Insect Life of Florida
The highways swish and buzz
hot tires like a one-night-stand
speak dirty to the asphalt
together they cry in an ecstasy of anger
using, being used, knowing this
yet, embracing the night
igniting desire, one
for distance, miles to go before
sleeping
rocking to the clicking of cooling
engines
the other, living only through
those that pass over
used up and forgotten on this
night that
beats
beats
beats
© Jilly’s 2016
Join us over at dVerse, where Walt is tending bar on this the first day of summer!
So sweaty good, this. I felt the beat. I heard the rhythm. Good good stuff.
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The connection of “Dangerous as the human heart” with our Florida roads is… well, it should become required reading in driver’s training classes! Awesome connection, vivid imagery in your poem… love the illustration!
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Thank you!
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This is wonderfully descriptive. I love:
“hot tires like a one-night-stand
speak dirty to the asphalt”
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This is such a sweaty, gritty side of summer. The cars are alive like beasts… Love it
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I love those opening lines:
‘The highways swish and buzz
hot tires like a one-night-stand
speak dirty to the asphalt’
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Wonderful descriptions in your verse 😀 Nicely done.
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oh the use of those cars on those summer nights — takes me back to the days of my youth in downtown Waukegan, Illinois…I was the one walking the streets watching the boys with their arms stuck out the windows, slowly scooping the loop….different from your scene here — but the sweaty cars and sweaty arms somehow related. 🙂
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I lived in Zion for a time and had a pet bird that would run up and down the window ledge like he was chasing the cars! The feel there is very much like the highway in my poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Sultry poem for sultry summer nights. I love the rhythm you beat out here, and the relationship between the tyres and the tarmac.
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Thanks!
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Wow, I love how you developed this–the pulsing heat of summer and that one night stand. Really well worked through.
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Thanks, Victoria!
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“hot tires like a one-night-stand
speak dirty to the asphalt”
Love this part in particular – and the whole poem reminds me of a destructive relationship also, where one party wants to be used, for whatever reason. So strong.
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Thank you! That is what the sound made me think of.
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I loved this sweaty sultry full of beat beat beats poem. Wonderful!
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Vivid descriptions in this piece.
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Enjoyed the creative comparison of cars on asphalt to a one night stand. Lots of auditory appeal too.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful piece!
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Prescient and dangerous and wild, like windows rolled down driving a Florida summer night. Inhaling the rush of wilderness. I wrote a whole sequence of poems some years back about US411 — the Orange Blossom Trail — that was paved, it seems to me, in desire. Great stuff.
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The OBT is certainly that! This one came from the sounds of racers on the 528. Thanks for reading.
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