Sea breezes tracking Like coastal scouts Followed by Angry radar lines Brawling where they meet At the front Raging war of hot air Throwing spears Cannon fire In a volley of ire Run for cover Pour the wine Draw the blind Rainy season Arrives © Jilly's 2016
Bjorn is tending bar over at dVerse Poet’s Pub tonight
where we are writing quadrilles that include the word ‘breeze.’
Should be a piece of cake, or a …. 🙂
Join us!
Jilly's 
Love your solution to the rainy season:
“Run for cover
Pour the wine
Draw the blind.”
Made me wish for rain 🙂
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Thanks! Although, we get monster storms to go along with the rain, hence the blinds & wine 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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Love this, especially:
“Run for cover
Pour the wine
Draw the blind”
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Stirring the Sangria as we speak! Thanks for reading 🙂
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There’s a riot going on! Great take on the epic battle between east and west. Only someone who lives on a peninsula will understand the dynamics that make for this show. Wonderful poem, Jilly! Pour one for me; I’m ducking for cover!
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Here we are into the summer season so a little rain (but not much) is most welcomed ~
Love the nature response ~
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Thank you 🙂 If we don’t get almost daily summer rain, the fires kick in. I love the storms – feeds my wildness!
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We are just coming out of a rainy season. I’m glad the sun is here. Describing this as a battle was so very original. I truly liked this.
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Thank you! Summer is our rainy season in Florida – every afternoon, faithfully 🙂
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So nicely done!! Can’t wait for the monsoon and for the breezes and clouds to be brawling on the coast!!
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Peninsula living means we have two coasts, and they do indeed brawl! Thanks for reading 🙂
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Wonderful personification!
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh, this is truly a most violent way the rain will battle. Running for cover sounds like the best way, love the intensity of this,
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Thanks!
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Run for cover, pour the wine. Yes! This, I must do. It’s rainy season here in PH. What a timely reminder. ^^
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Thank you and what an inspiring blog you have!
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Thank you Jilly! I’m happy to have met you here in blogosphere too. ❤❤❤
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Oh that second stanza sets up the scene of the angry destructive summer tornadoes and storms that can be, are, the plague of the plaines now. Well done.
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Plague of the peninsula, as well! But I love the excitement that builds with the storms – it’s energizing 🙂 Thanks for reading
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Ooh, I love the energy of this!
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Thank you!
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Not sure If I’d like to be around these battles in the skies…very interesting. We will get our share of crazy thunderstorms though. I admire your word choices like “coastal scouts” and “volley of ire”…
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Thanks! It’s every afternoon in the summer… in fact, one is building as I type. I love the energy! Thanks for reading 🙂
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meteorolgical in meter too – very clever and visual take on the theme
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Thank you, Laura! and, wow! wonderful pix 🙂
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A strong metaphor!
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